August 12, 2015: The stranger
before him looked exactly like the girl he'd dreamt about
The coffee shop wasn’t really his comfort
zone. He didn’t usually spend time in places like this. She had wanted to meet
in public, and he had let her pick the spot. After all, he was unfamiliar with
this city.
He tried not to let his mind wander to
that day, when his family had shattered into fragments. Flashes of memory still
pushed their way to the front of his mind. His beautiful wife fading from this
world, the infant he couldn’t imagine raising with his broken heart.
The stranger before him looked exactly
like the girl he’d dreamt about.
Here are the links to my friend’s
stories!
Wendy Knight, Author: www.wendyknightauthor.blogspot.com
Kelly Martin, Author: www.kellymartinbooks.blogspot.com
Alison Woods (Peering Into. .
.): http://alisonmillerwoods.wordpress.com/
Jessica Winn, The Distracted
Writer:http://thedistractedwriter.com/
R.K. Grow: http://www.rkgtheauthor.com/
Stephanie Worlton's Kreating
Krazy blog: http://stephanieworlton.blogspot.com/
Leah Sanders, inklings: http://inklings-leahsanders.blogspot.com/
Laura D. Bastian http://www.lauradbastian.com/
Jaclyn Weist http://jaclynweist.blogspot.com
Amryn Scott http://wildscottkids.wordpress.com/
K.R. Wilburn http://www.krwilburnbooks.com/blog
Lindzee Armstrong/Lydia Winters http://www.lindzeearmstrong.com/blog-2
Miranda D. Nelson http://www.mirandadnelson.blogspot.com/
Angela Schroeder http://angelaschroederauthor.blogspot.com/
Ginny Romney http://romneyrants.blogspot.com/
Canda Mortensen http://candamortensen.blogspot.com
Jenna Eatough http://mistglenmoon.net/blog/
Starimprint: http://starimprint.blogspot.com/
Kaye P. Clark: http://kayepclarkwriter.blogspot.com/
Jenifer Lee: www.myfam-i-lee.blogspot.com/
Caleb Warnock: calebwarnock.blogspot.com/
DawnRay Ammon: http://areaderlivinginthewritingworld.blogspot.com/
Eliza Crosby: http://authorelizacrosby.blogspot.com/
Denise Kasanicky: createinspiredream.wordpress.com
I love how you've set the scene. It's really clear why that moment is important to him and makes you wonder what will happen next.
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